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    Critique my website? Please?

    The goal of my website was simplicity.. I'm finished with the design for now, but the main page things i say are kinda stupidly worded. Just like that last sentence...

    http://jreed.co.cc

    Thanks

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    Nice.. it looks pretty good. I like the rollovers you put in it.

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    Re: Critique my website? Please?

    It looks good.

    I would suggest making the image go to the very top and bottom of the screen.

    The title looks a bit strange as "Jeremy Reed ::". Maybe add "Home"?

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    Re: Critique my website? Please?

    Thanks Alex,

    I didn't realize it did that. I have a php echo for $page which shows the value of "?id="
    and if you go directly to the site it'll be blank, lol... OR if you put "?id=poopypants" for example it'll say "Jeremy Reed :: poopypants".. I should change that lol.

    When i first read your comment i assumed you were talking about the banner at the bottom right of the content and that gave me the idea to put the name of the page there as well.

    Thanks again. And thanks other guy before alex for your comment

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    Re: Critique my website? Please?

    Looks Nice, i would suggest to put a header on it but other than that its good.

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    Re: Critique my website? Please?

    Thanks.

    I know people don't like the white space on the top and bottom, but i think it's cool. I need to find something, like a header, to put in that space but i'm not sure how I should present it yet

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    Re: Critique my website? Please?

    the background looks fine, simplistic. try using curved corners for your main box. and the main links. also try grayish borders since i think the contrast of colors is too much. what i mean is try softer transition of colors.

    and since you load less content, php may not be necessary. try loading content from hidden divs, fetching html from hidden divs and placing then to the main box. this way, it removes the load time for each part of your site. ofcourse, it needs javascript.

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    Re: Critique my website? Please?

    very simple and to the point just as you say.

    nice work
    Last edited by mjserv; 06-14-2010 at 04:17 PM.

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    Re: Critique my website? Please?

    hey nice site you got there..specially the auto load..

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    Re: Critique my website? Please?

    I would say it is a tad small, but if that's the way you like it then I suppose it's fine; it does look quite lonely in the middle there when I have the browser window full screen.
    The shadow around the main box is also too dark: shadows should be gentle and give dimension but not dark enough to be outright eye-drawing.
    The final thing is that you have put your email address right on show there and that is just inviting a huge amount of spam to your. The best way of implementing contact is to remove your email address and leave the contact form there or create a dedicated email address specifically to post up publicly, so your main inbox doesn't fill with spam.

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