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    need some criticism

    new to this web design game, can someone please look at my site and give it a criticque?
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    Re: need some criticism

    You still need to change Images\title5.jpg to Images/title5.jpg


    I went and viewed the Header image not that i could see it. so i thought maybe if i changed Images\title5.jpg So i did and i changed it to Images/title5.jpg I could see the banner.

    Well to make my point. I just wanted to say nice banner.
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    Re: need some criticism

    Maybe it's just my monitor, or maybe just my eyes, but the tabs on the banner are a tad on the dark side, kinda hard to see it.

    - Shenlone.

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    Re: need some criticism

    Lookin' good man, nice clean and professional site.

    I'd recommend working with some css positioning to bolt your stuff in place. I'm on a widescreen in ff and the page stretches out and loses a bit of punch.

    But you are new at it, and looking sweet that considered good work, keep it up.

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    Re: need some criticism

    Well checking it out it looks pretty good but in my opinion you should change the background color of the pages it would look nicer or maybe add some type of background image texture it would look way better! Other than that it looks great!

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    Re: need some criticism

    It's very nice.
    Although you are new to this
    I would suggest maybe, something a bit more original.
    Something to draw people's attention.
    You should try and follow the rule of thirds, [of photography].
    And the rule of color as well.
    That would draw people in and make them want to look around a bit more.
    && of course, if you're not sure what the rule of thirds
    or rule of color is, you can always google it.

    But these are only suggestions.
    Buh-Byee!
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    Re: need some criticism

    the desing is very simple :eek4:
    add a layout more creative and a good codification

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    Re: need some criticism

    it need some gradient color, and a more attractive layout something relate to bricks maybe

    best regards

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    Re: need some criticism

    That static header is hellish, plus the links really don't look like links, and the text on them does not contrast well. (color theory)

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