Drawing - What do you think?

[Swiblet]

I've been planning to make a comic called Hellchild for a while now, but my Deviantart page has been sooooo full of requests =< I have too many things to do!!!

But luckily, I was able to find the time to make a quick preview. The only difference is that the actual comic won't be in color.



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The portrait of innocence is the human baby. Somewhere between then and adulthood, it becomes its own inverse. Why not have a head start?

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Like it? =) I don't need rep if you don't want to give it, I just want critiques please!

~~B3N

[Little_Cider]

i think it looks goood , but i cant draw so thats one reason why , someone else might say its rubbish lol , but in my personal opion good job

[sunils]

Good drawing

[Swiblet]

Thanks alot!! =3 I'll move this to the graphics/webdesign now, too many people have viewed this thread and not even voted on it.

~~B3N

[Twinkie]

Very good drawing and coloring with Photoshop. Also, great job making the fire realistic.
You should have centered the face of hellchild and I think you should make your comic in color.
This drawing shows a lot of talent , my vote was 9 stars.

[galaxyAbstractor]

nice. Did you draw that by hand?

[Swiblet]

Thanks ^^ And no, the lineart was drawn by hand, including the lines for the fire's basic shape, but I colored and made effects with Photoshop and my handy dandy...horrible...mouse ^_^

~~B3N

[tgkprog]

i did not like the teeth. too much space used by the teeth. hands look cute. eyes look a little evil , teeth are supposed to be evili guess but dont ... make the hand bigger and change the hand coloring or something to make it look less baby cute

[sunils]

Sorry, i was in a hurry burry to go to sleep. so didnt vote. now i have voted and what is that something anoying at the right bottom of the picture.

[score_under]

This is just amazing! Teach me to draw :D !