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    [OFFER] Get creds to look

    Well since I have updated my site to a new look, there are bound to be some mistakes. So what I am offering is for you guys to look around on my site and find any spelling, or script errors. And I will give you credits for them.

    For Spelling error: 5 creds
    For Script error: 10 creds

    SITE: www.bhutani.net

    NOTE: If someone else reports the error before you do only they will get the creds. First come first serve basis!

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    Re: [OFFER] Get creds to look

    line 2 char 1 and 7.. its showing script error.
    [LEFT][B]Sunil Sankar
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    Re: [OFFER] Get creds to look

    Well the attachment is what I get when I try to go full screen... the url is

    http://www.bhutani.net/content/full_....swf&id=100106
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails [OFFER] Get creds to look-websiteerror.png  

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    Re: [OFFER] Get creds to look

    Quote Originally Posted by sunils View Post
    line 2 char 1 and 7.. its showing script error.
    What do you mean.. sorry i dont know the php lingo!
    Edit:
    Quote Originally Posted by themcman1 View Post
    Well the attachment is what I get when I try to go full screen... the url is

    http://www.bhutani.net/content/full_....swf&id=100106
    hmmm works fine wit me.. try other games to see if it still happens (it could be jus that u have something installed that makes you download the .swf file)
    Last edited by frznmnky; 09-18-2008 at 12:11 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    Quote Originally Posted by frznmnky View Post
    What do you mean.. sorry i dont know the php lingo!
    when i open you home page, its showing a script error in IE (status bar). that was the message i got when i checked up the details..
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    Highlighted in red are spelling mistakes/ typos.
    Highlighted in blue are capitalization &/or new sentence recommendations.
    Highlighted in purple are letters which might be better if omitted.
    Highlighted in green are suggested additions ;

    Home Page

    "War On Spam (NEW)
    This game can be played byt 1 or 2 players and have 3 diffic..."

    "Snack Attack (6 plays)
    Deliver your meal up the stairs. Bes ure to balance yourself..."

    "coloring Book (NEW)
    A Flash colouring book"

    "Welcome to Mr. B's arcade, here you can play games ranging from the old to the new..."

    Arcade Page

    " Mission Mars (NEW)
    Try to land your craft on a flat ground!"

    "Cronch Fight for the Ge... (NEW)
    Try to shoot your opponent. You have to win two rounds for vi..."

    Puzzle Page

    "Peg (NEW)
    Solitaire game where the objective is to remove all buy 1 pi..."

    <Do you want more sections to be checked? Let me know if you do -I've finished here for now.>

    Also, the descriptions in the line which follows each game's title vary in consistency : some capitalize the 1st letter of each word, some capitalize random words, & others capitalize only the start of the sentences.

    I hope this doesn't sound like I'm being fussy! Some of the things I've pointed out are just down to personal taste. But you did ask us to check through your website, & I hope this has been of some help to you.
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    Re: [OFFER] Get creds to look

    Quote Originally Posted by zen-r View Post
    Highlighted in red are spelling mistakes/ typos.
    Highlighted in blue are capitalization &/or new sentence recommendations.
    Highlighted in purple are letters which might be better if omitted.
    Highlighted in green are suggested additions ;

    Home Page

    "War On Spam (NEW)
    This game can be played byt 1 or 2 players and have 3 diffic..."

    "Snack Attack (6 plays)
    Deliver your meal up the stairs. Bes ure to balance yourself..."

    "coloring Book (NEW)
    A Flash colouring book"

    "Welcome to Mr. B's arcade, here you can play games ranging from the old to the new..."

    Arcade Page

    " Mission Mars (NEW)
    Try to land your craft on a flat ground!"

    "Cronch Fight for the Ge... (NEW)
    Try to shoot your opponent. You have to win two rounds for vi..."

    Puzzle Page

    "Peg (NEW)
    Solitaire game where the objective is to remove all buy 1 pi..."

    <Do you want more sections to be checked? Let me know if you do -I've finished here for now.>

    Also, the descriptions in the line which follows each game's title vary in consistency : some capitalize the 1st letter of each word, some capitalize random words, & others capitalize only the start of the sentences.

    I hope this doesn't sound like I'm being fussy! Some of the things I've pointed out are just down to personal taste. But you did ask us to check through your website, & I hope this has been of some help to you.
    .
    Was about to post a few, but saw your post...oh well.

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    Re: [OFFER] Get creds to look

    Quote Originally Posted by Sokii View Post
    Was about to post a few, but saw your post...oh well.
    Sorry.
    Pipped-at-the-post, as they say! ;)
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    Re: [OFFER] Get creds to look

    Quote Originally Posted by sunils View Post
    when i open you home page, its showing a script error in IE (status bar). that was the message i got when i checked up the details..
    Hmm it shouldnt show it.. try again maybe it was a fluke!

    Quote Originally Posted by zen-r View Post
    Highlighted in red are spelling mistakes/ typos.
    Highlighted in blue are capitalization &/or new sentence recommendations.
    Highlighted in purple are letters which might be better if omitted.
    Highlighted in green are suggested additions ;

    Home Page

    "War On Spam (NEW)
    This game can be played byt 1 or 2 players and have 3 diffic..."

    "Snack Attack (6 plays)
    Deliver your meal up the stairs. Bes ure to balance yourself..."

    "coloring Book (NEW)
    A Flash colouring book"

    "Welcome to Mr. B's arcade, here you can play games ranging from the old to the new..."

    Arcade Page

    " Mission Mars (NEW)
    Try to land your craft on a flat ground!"

    "Cronch Fight for the Ge... (NEW)
    Try to shoot your opponent. You have to win two rounds for vi..."

    Puzzle Page

    "Peg (NEW)
    Solitaire game where the objective is to remove all buy 1 pi..."

    <Do you want more sections to be checked? Let me know if you do -I've finished here for now.>

    Also, the descriptions in the line which follows each game's title vary in consistency : some capitalize the 1st letter of each word, some capitalize random words, & others capitalize only the start of the sentences.

    I hope this doesn't sound like I'm being fussy! Some of the things I've pointed out are just down to personal taste. But you did ask us to check through your website, & I hope this has been of some help to you.
    .
    Wow thx so much.. yea keep on chekin.. creds have rep have been given

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    Quote Originally Posted by frznmnky View Post
    ...Wow thx so much.. yea keep on chekin.. creds have rep have been given
    Credits received -Thanks. :cool: Love your animated sig, by the way -it's hard to ignore!

    Continuing where I left off ;

    Highlighted in red are spelling mistakes/ typos.
    Highlighted in blue are capitalization &/or new sentence recommendations.
    Highlighted in purple are letters which might be better if omitted.
    Highlighted in green are suggested additions ;

    Shooters Page

    "KwikShot (NEW)
    First Peron Shooter"

    "105 Fish In A Barrel (NEW)
    105 only the BLUE fish in this game - it is much harder that it sounds"
    (also, not sure what "105" means!)

    "Majestic (NEW)
    try & survived the creepy nucleo's."

    Sports Page

    "Mini Putt 3 (NEW)
    This is a mini-golf game that can be played on your PC"

    "Mini Golf (NEW)
    Another Mini Golf game that can be played on your desktop"


    Uncategorized Page

    "Sonic (12 plays)
    Yes!! its a half-decent sonic game that you can play online"

    (added a hyphen. There are many more words throughout the site which would also be best if joined by a hyphen -but I thought it would look too fussy if I listed them all!)

    "Age Of War (NEW)
    Beware extremely addicting!" (addictive)


    "Bubble Pop (NEW)
    Pop the bubble on the plastic protevtive wrapper"

    Note:, I haven't checked the game descriptions beyond their 1st page. That is to say, where they are too long and the description line ends "...", then that is where my check finishes. I'd suggest, if possible, that any overly long descriptions be shortened to just fit on the 1 line.

    I don't normally visit game sites, but now I've visited yours & tried out a few games I can recommend it to anyone. A fun way to kill a few minutes (or a few aliens!)
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