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    Review My Site for 10 Credits!

    I almost put this in "Review My Site" but technically this is a transaction so I put it here. Give me a fairly detailed review of my site telling me whats good ands whats not, merly 4-6 sentances, and you can get 10 credits. If its really detailed I might throw in a little more. Just want some decent feedback, and throwin in some credits might help Easy money people! Thanks.

    http://www.warpspeed-productions.tk

    And by the way, I'm working on getting a new domain name thats .com and more easy to remember.
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    Re: Review My Site for 10 Credits!

    So ok, let's see:

    - Navigation: The navigation bar is too simple. I'd suggest using a CSS navigation bar or so. There are pretty cool ones over here:
    http://www.noupe.com/javascript/37-g...nterfaces.html

    - Logo/Banner: The plain "Warpspeed Productions" doesn't sound professional to me, honestly. I'd suggest creating a logo or using some text effects in photoshop to make a this text up there look more professional. For photoshop text effects, have a look over here:
    http://www.hongkiat.com/blog/22-best...ect-tutorials/

    - Well, that's about all. I hope I have helped.

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    Re: Review My Site for 10 Credits!

    Quote Originally Posted by akkari View Post
    So ok, let's see:

    - Navigation: The navigation bar is too simple. I'd suggest using a CSS navigation bar or so. There are pretty cool ones over here:
    http://www.noupe.com/javascript/37-g...nterfaces.html

    - Logo/Banner: The plain "Warpspeed Productions" doesn't sound professional to me, honestly. I'd suggest creating a logo or using some text effects in photoshop to make a this text up there look more professional. For photoshop text effects, have a look over here:
    http://www.hongkiat.com/blog/22-best...ect-tutorials/

    - Well, that's about all. I hope I have helped.
    Thanks alot! that does help aloy actually. Making my site more proffesional is an important step. Ill send you that 10. :lockd:
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    Re: Review My Site for 10 Credits!

    Well, I am not offering help specifically to get 'those 10'. Well, if you need to ask regarding what I've suggested or need further help, you can ask, you don't have to pay!

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    Re: Review My Site for 10 Credits!

    I also suggest you to use css menus, and a logo that looks more professional
    That button effect doesnt look good, and i also suggest to add something to the site, it looks too plain, maybe you can add some titles made in photoshop, with effects
    Last edited by damsch12; 04-02-2009 at 06:30 PM.

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    Re: Review My Site for 10 Credits!

    Quote Originally Posted by damsch12 View Post
    I also suggest you to use css menus, and a logo that looks more professional
    Yeah, thats a good suggestion; and everyones saying it, so I'd better get on that!
    Quote Originally Posted by damsch12 View Post
    That button effect doesnt look good
    By button effect you mean that wierd little frame around the title at the top of home and around the update? If so, yeah, that was just a test I thought I'd try today.
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    Re: Review My Site for 10 Credits!

    Your site is simple and good for sep. But your site lacks meta keywords and description. You better check that.
    You can just extract the table properties in the page to make a style sheet. that will makes your page even smaller and faster

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    Re: Review My Site for 10 Credits!

    ok first good content but your nav bar is... well it isn't it needs buttons or something
    brighten it up a bit add contrast like blue and black or red and black
    your adserveing try using openx (openx.org) youll earn more and have global ad's and not fixed ads(pay per click extra.)
    just liven it up without over crowding it
    hope this helps can

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    Re: Review My Site for 10 Credits!

    Quote Originally Posted by kruns11 View Post
    By button effect you mean that wierd little frame around the title at the top of home and around the update? If so, yeah, that was just a test I thought I'd try today.
    yep

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    Re: Review My Site for 10 Credits!

    Well Site is pretty clean and nice.
    To make it more professional, have a separate background colour where your menu is placed.
    News Fader is ok, but I think the header with your company name is very basic simple, it must be a little big (the header) and some rare & unique fonts, with some kind of graphics, rather than the simple text.

    This is enough to increase bounces, I believe.
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