Please review my site

[nikomia]

Hello, I am a new x10hosting member and I think I am one of the youngest members. I am just 16. I have created my very first website. The website isn’t that good. It is about walking for fitness and fitness guide. I have created this website mainly because of Adsense. Please review my site http://www.walkingforfitness.co.cc/ and tell me if I should change something or add something. I would really appreciate if you helped me.

[moiety]

The site seems pretty sorted. Impressive for a first attempt.

Criticisms:
The logo byline:
One of the best sources of article about fitness.
...would be better replaced with something like:
All you need to know about health and fitness
Everything about health and fitness

..Also, I'd hoof the www.hooverwebdesign.com bit from the banner bar.

Google search box:
"Use this Search Box to find your demanding article"
huh?

I don't really like the feedzilla thing. Personal opinion.

If it were me, I wouldn't admit where I got the feeds from (about page). Why view your site when you can go to the source?

"Privacy and Policy" should be "Privacy Policy"

Pretty impressive overall

[callumacrae]

Good for a first attempt

Did you use HTML, or something like dreamweaver or frontpage?

I would have to disagree with "welcome to", I just find it cheesy, sorry

My eyes kind of bled when looking at the article links

Apart from that, I quite like it

~Callum

[nikomia]

Thank you for the tips moiety. I do have some English grammar problem. And Alex Mac I used dreamweaver CS4 to create this website.:drool:

[kkenny]

Well, it's not bad, but it's not that great either. It doesn't look "web 2.0"-ish, what's the type of audience you want your site to grab?

[myx10]

You did such a good job to compare with your age. Everything is nice, even the meta tags. But I find the color seems conflict? Anyway, good job and I admire you for that!

[nikomia]

Thank you. I do know that my website is not good. But I am trying my best to create a great website. Can anybody tell how to create a website where user can create their own account like Log in or Sign up. I am trying to create a gaming website like Tittat (http://www.tmondo.com/) did. :happysad:

[playminigames]

Your site is not very 2.0ish, and i dont like the brick on the navigation bar. I dont like the colors on where the article links are, as they dont really match your site.

That site is actually powered by a cms, and that theme you would probably have to buy. I am currently building one from scratch(look at my sig if you want to check it out), and i am willing to help you out with it if you want.

Good luck nikomia!

[sourfacedcyclop]

Thank you. I do know that my website is not good. But I am trying my best to create a great website. Can anybody tell how to create a website where user can create their own account like Log in or Sign up. I am trying to create a gaming website like Tittat (http://www.tmondo.com/) did. :happysad:

You could use a CMS like Wordpress, Joomla, etc to get a log in feature. You could also use php and make a log in script. If you don't have any knowlage of php, nor the desire to learn any, I would go to the CMS route.

[nikomia]

I like your site (http://sourfacedcyclop.com) design, template and everything. Where did you get the template or you designed it by yourself? And also did you create the login script by yourself? Is it a Joomla template or Wordpress template?;)