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    Review My website

    please review my website

    http://www.951dds.com

    While you are there feel free to click the +1 button in the upper left corner!!! thanks my friends!!!

    Any tips for SEO like for google??? Thanks all!!!!

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    Re: Review My website

    Ugh, no offense, but it looks like it is from the 1990's.

    This pure html coding thing doesn't really fly these days anymore. Try putting some type of CMS or at least make the site have a navigation bar and all of that OR at least get a logo, for my eyes sake.. This looks very unprofessional.
    Last edited by NateN34; 10-04-2011 at 07:14 PM.

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    Re: Review My website

    Well, I only know basic html... But i will take your tips into consideration. I added a logo at the top now.... Thanks for the feedback... my main goal is for people to find this website if they are searching for emergency dentist in google who are from my town. It works for the most part but could use improvement.

    I dont want a navigation bar because there is nothing to navigate on my website. There really isnt much content and it fits all in 1 page...
    Thanks for the feedback....

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    Re: Review My website

    Hi

    I agree with NateN34 in that it looks rather un-professional and dated.

    Perhaps you may consider getting a free template [ lots out there ] and
    re-hashing.....

    Look here for example : - http://getsometemplates.com/free_template_160.html

    I just did a quick google search and this was the first on the list......

    If you need any help let me know....

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    Re: Review My website

    Quote Originally Posted by NateN34 View Post
    This pure html coding thing doesn't really fly these days anymore. Try putting some type of CMS ...
    There is absolutely no need to use a CMS of any sort for a single-page site. It's a dentist's landing page, and unless you can think of a good way to do online dentistry, the landing page is really all that's needed. A CMS would be a tremendous waste of resources.

    The design needs some work, to be sure*, but design has nothing to do with whether or not a CMS is used. And why on earth would a single-page site need a menu? A single static HTML page with a bit of CSS would do just fine. There are problems with Dr. Mani's page, but they have nothing to do with the fact that it's a static HTML page. Now on to the review:

    Leaving aside Google's misuse of microdata and non-standard tags without proper namespacing (that's not your fault, and it makes the plusone thing work), there are some major issues with the HTML on the site. I'm not talking about the appearance---if the HTML were correct, changing the appearance would be the proverbial piece of sugar-free, orthodonture-appliance-friendly, dentist-approved cake.

    HTML is intended to be a WYSIWYM (what you see is what you mean) environment, so anything in the tags inside the body that directly tells the browser how to display things is a sign that you're doing it wrong. The <br> tag, for instance, has only a couple of legitimate uses: it can be used to indicate line breaks in a stanza of poetry, or it can be used within a data unit like an address (although, for use with microformat data, it would be better to use <span>s or <p>s to separate the address parts).

    Once the page means what it's supposed to mean, there is a means of applying appearance rules to the page: CSS (or Cascading Style Sheets). Normally, that would involve a separate file, but for a single static page, it can be included on the page within <style> tags in the head section.

    This is getting well beyond the scope of a simple review. I've already taken a bit of a whack at cleaning up the HTML and giving it semantic markup (including extending the microformat data within the page to make it easier for machine readers like Google to understand your address and so forth):

    HTML Code:
    <!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Strict//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-strict.dtd">
    <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" itemscope itemtype="http://schema.org/Organization">
    <head>
       <title>Peter Mani DDS</title>
       <meta itemprop="name" content="Peter Mani DDS Emergency Dentist Riverside CA">
       <meta itemprop="description" content="Emergency Dentist Riverside CA, Denture Repairs, Dentures, General Dentist, Teeth Whitening.">
       <meta itemprop="image" content="http://www.951dds.com/tooth.jpg">
       <meta name="description" content="Home page for the office of Peter Mani, DDS.">
       <meta name="keywords" content="Emergency Dentist Riverside CA, dentist, toothache, Sunday, Emergency, pain, emergency dentist , 2011">
    </head>
    <body>
       <g:plusone annotation="inline"></g:plusone>
       <script type="text/javascript">
         (function() {
           var po = document.createElement('script'); po.type = 'text/javascript'; po.async = true;
           po.src = 'https://apis.google.com/js/plusone.js';
           var s = document.getElementsByTagName('script')[0]; s.parentNode.insertBefore(po, s);
         })();
       </script>
       <div id="header">
          <h1 id="site_title"><img src="toothlogo.jpg">Peter Mani DDS</h1>
          <p itemprop="streetAddress">7759 California Ave</p>
          <p><span itemprop="addressLocality">Riverside</span>, <span itemprop="addressRegion">CA</span> <span itemprop="postalCode">92504</span></p>
          <p>General Dentistry by Appointment</p>
          <p itemprop="telephone">951-687-8700</p>
       </div><!-- end header div -->
       <div id="main_content">
          <h2 id="content_headline">Have a toothache?</h2>
          <p>Give us a call.  We often answer the phone afterhours and I check the voice messages regularly 7 days a week.</p>
          <h2 id="location_heading">Our location</h2>
          <img src="map2.jpg">
       </div>
       <div id="about">
          <h2>About the doctor</h2>
          <p>Dr Mani grew up locally in Riverside California graduating from Poly Highschool in 1996. He graduated dental school in San Francisco.  Upon graduating he returned back to Riverside to serve the community where he grew up.  He is a member of the American Dental Assocation, California Dental Association, and the Tri-County Dental Society.  Outside of work Peter enjoys watching sports, going to the gym, and riding motorcycles.  Dr Mani was born in Chicago.  His favorite sports team is the Chicago Bears.</p>
       </div><!-- end about div -->
       <div id="links">
          <h2>Links</h2>
          <ul id="linklist">
             <li><a href="http://www.ada.org">American Dental Association</a></li>
             <li><a href="http://www.cda.org">California Dental Association</a></li>
             <li><a href="http://www.tcds.org/">Tri-County Dental Society</a></li>
             <li><a href="http://dental.uop.edu">Unversity of the Pacific School of Dentistry</a></li>
             <li><a href="http://www.riversideca.gov">City of Riverside</a></li>
             <li><a href="http://www.chicagobears.com">The Chicago Bears</a></li>
             <li><a href="http://www.nba.com">NBA.com</a></li>
          </ul>
       </div><!-- end links div -->
       <div id="hitcounter">
          <a href="http://www.easycounter.com/"><img src="http://www.easycounter.com/counter.php?friendlydentist" border="0" alt="Website Hit Counters"></a>
          <br><a href="http://www.easycounter.com/">HTML Hit Counter</a><br><center>10/04/2011
       </div><!-- end hitcounter div -->
    </body>
    </html>
    Note that there are no <br>, <center> or <font> tags to be found anywhere. Note, too, that it doesn't look like much as it stands -- it still needs to be styled, but at least the HTML part makes sense, and is accessible both to Google and to people with disabilities. Send me a PM (that's personal message, if you're not a denizen of the web world), and we can hammer out a more appropriate design.

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    * Okay, a lot of work.
    Last edited by essellar; 10-04-2011 at 10:46 PM. Reason: fixed microdata in HTML
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    Re: Review My website

    if you are concern about the SEO, i think you shouldtry a cms that you can update regularly without going into your codes. try wordpress

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    Quote Originally Posted by cheezo View Post
    if you are concern about the SEO, i think you shouldtry a cms that you can update regularly without going into your codes. try wordpress
    Again, that's absolutely unnecessary. Good HTML, with the addition of microformat data, will do more for search engine response than anything a CMS will do. Why install more than 900 PHP files and involve a database (plus SEO plugins if you want to get the results you're talking about) for a one-page site?
    “Beware of bugs in the above code; I have only proved it correct, not tried it.” --Donald Knuth
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    Re: Review My website

    gracias por tu aporte

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    thanks for all the information... way too confusing for me... it beyond my knowledge how it works beside what I have already... if someone willing to help design my page to it will optimize SEO please send me a PM then we can work something out...

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    how bout trying the rvsitebuilder on the cpanel?
    btw you're displaying people who like facebook not people who like your site

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