GazSoda - Free Android Applications | My Site

[tamirguliver47]

Hello Friends !

My name is Or Tamir and I am from Israel, My hobby is computer engineering and in the last time i started to study a lot about Android SDK (My favourite language)... So I started to make some apps and put them on the Android Markets...(Currently more than 10 Markets) so in the last time i opened a new site to help me publish these apps more...
And right now this site is not showing only my apps! I added there free applications pages that people can see the Name and the Description of a lot of free Android apps and of course to Share it on Facebook, Twitter and even in the new Google +...

So Please take a look at my site:
http://www.gazsoda.com

For Contact Me:
http://www.gazsoda.com/Contact/

or

tamirguliver@gmail.com
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I am interested in Link Exchange and in Site Designer

Thank You Very Much

[eggo9432]

I like the site dude, it is very sleek and to the point. A few thing I would recommend though. Firstly, I might add a text effect to your log to make it pop a little bit. Secondly, on your first page you have some grammar mistakes. I took the liberty of correcting them to help you out.

"We'll provide you high quality Applications anytime, anywhere !
The most important is that our service is 99.9% available on the internet." should read like this:

We'll provide you high quality Applications anywhere, anytime!
More importantly, our service is over 99.9% attainable through the internet.

Here is the next bit of text:
"Are you an Android developer?
Have you got any Applications on the Market?
They doesn't get enough downloads?
What do you wait for?
Send us your Applications and we'll provide you a lot of downloads and reviews in very short time!"

It should read :

Are you an Android developer?
Do you have any Applications on the Market?
Are you unhappy with the amount of downloads that your app receives?
What are you waiting for?
Send us your Application and we'll offer you the chance to vastly increase your amounts of app downloads and reviews.

I think that that changing these thing could really add to your site. If you need any more help with grammar, or anything else for that matter, just message me back!

[tamirguliver47]

Hi,
Thank you so much for the help ! I really take a care about what you said
and again thank you for the helping... I'm really appreciating it

[jeremy71]

On this line:
Send us your Application and we'll offer you the chance to vastly increase your amounts of app downloads and reviews.

amounts should be amount
but I would suggest taking that word out completely such as this:
....vastly increase your app downloads and reviews.

[eggo9432]

Thanks for that catch; I didn't see it when I was writing it out!