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    Please review my site

    Okay, so I went and re-did my website according to the suggestions made by other members. How do you think it looks now? Any constructive criticism would be appreciated.

    The site is: http://bigtree.elementfx.com

    Thank you in advance!

    Edit:
    By the way... thanks to all the people who reviewed my old site!
    Last edited by bigtree; 07-14-2008 at 02:38 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    Re: Please review my site

    It's great to see that you've taken some suggestions on board. ;) The page looks a lot better now, since it's actually centered on the page, as apposed to in the left corner like it was previously (I think). You've also increased the size of the text at the bar at the top, which is much better. I personally don't mind the whole black/green type of theme either, I don't exactly think you've gone too overboard on that.

    You've got some validation errors that you should fix up.
    http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=ht...ementfx.com%2F for xHTML and
    http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/v...ementfx.com%2F for CSS

    The tabs in games.htm turn the same colour as the text on hover, this might be browser specific though; what browsers are you testing this in? Other than that... I suppose more content is always a good thing.
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    Re: Please review my site

    Loos very nice!

    The only problems that I can see are the "click here" text going over the right side of the box and the overlap of the search div/box with the main box as well.

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    Re: Please review my site

    I first thought that the
    >> fun >> games >> movies etc. was the navigation which confused me a bit.
    Also, try changing the background color of the links where when you hover over them you get more.
    Overall I would give it a 7/10.


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    Re: Please review my site

    My Suggestion cut back on images in tables.

    Divid the table up in more blocks & use table background colors or CSS to color up ur background. Also on the links. They are in a black background & sorta hard to see. Maybe define where the links are better. Also Sublinks i would put a border to really define them since the over lay other text on ur site & it also have a hard background color to make out.

    Other then that i would say ur site looks fine.

    Here is my site for some CSS & Table ideas or layout/look
    i cut down on dividing tables cause i had a complaint of CTRL + MOUSE (up or down) function on firefox. to increase the size of text on pages. on Opera which i use it increases & decrease the whole page not just text. So i changed my layout like 10 different times & restuctured everything.

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    Re: Please review my site

    I like the colours, but perhaps a bit bright.

    It seems to have lots of content
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    Re: Please review my site

    THank you all for the helpful comments! I will be fixing my site now.
    Edit:
    BTW, TheMan177, I'm using IE7
    Last edited by bigtree; 07-14-2008 at 03:43 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    Re: Please review my site

    think you need to dim down the logo text and fix up the menu a bit to make it compliment other parts of the design and also, i think i see a big black spot on the right side of the website. try fixing that.


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    Re: Please review my site

    The only suggestion that I have at the moment is that the sidebar menu should be more well defined. When I hover over it, and the menu pops out, it's still black on black, which is kind of odd. It doesn't have the same feel when it's like that.

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    Re: Please review my site

    Comments:
    * There are some HTML and CSS validation errors:
    * * http://validator.w3.org/check?verbos...om%2Findex.htm
    * * http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/v...om%2Findex.htm
    * The stuff in the header does look too much like a menu
    * There is a hole in the border to the right of the Google search box.
    * The menu should be separated from the main content.
    * The colour of the expanded bit of the menu could be changed.

    I quite like the design. Well done.
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